Monday 24 September 2012

My Day and Night poem


Day and Night
In the day children hurdle towards the park,
and parants stroll along an active footpath.

In the evening families stroll,
and the children march along
the path in the park.

1 comment:

  1. Hi,Jarred

    I like your story or poem about
    day night and also like how you describe
    how they walk active along the footpath.

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